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DanaBoBana, July 9th, 2009, 3:43 pm

Here it is! The last page of the fourth chapter! I'm in the process of working on chapter 5, but I'm also redoing the first 3 chapters >___< Not sure whether to replace the earlier chapters or just keep it the way it is. Well anyway, I hope you guys have enjoyed it so far! ^_^

Sol, July 9th, 2009, 4:09 pm

Haha, I must say, Gavin is quickly becoming one of my favourite characters XD.

akaAkiraHikari, July 9th, 2009, 5:40 pm

Keep it the way it is! It rocks! And... "Don't Be So Pissy." He says... Smiling. XD

Yuy_Ren, July 9th, 2009, 10:11 pm

very awesome as always xD

lovesfirstkiss, July 9th, 2009, 10:47 pm

It looks fine, I wouldn't do reduxes

People get into this terrible loop of only doing reduxes and people die of cliff hangers left hanging for fifty years. (Believe me, I'm responsible for murdering people with this method.)

Awwww They could shout, 'JAKE LIKES YOU' and she still wouldn't get it.

It's so weird! She literally thinks like a little child!! :o She is cute though... it just seem weird for her to not pick up on teenage signals like that at her age.(Not just the not knowing Jake likes her, but you know when Melanie said she didn't want to be around her anymore sure it would hurt an average teen but it wouldn't be so shocking.)

Amante, July 12th, 2009, 1:39 am

awww kaylee reminds me alot of yuzuki eba from the mangakimi no iru machi by seo kouji.
I love the story you got going on here, and your art is really clean and awesome

lazy_kitsune, July 15th, 2009, 3:44 am

Hahaha, what a lively trio! xD

I think you should keep the pages the way they are. They show your progress, although they're already good!! :3

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